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एक बिधवा महिलाको यौनकथा
kbs — Mon, 10/12/2009 - 14:52
न उग्र हुन्छ न रुक्छ जवानी
न फुल्छ ओँठमा, न लुक्छ जवानी
यो सस्तो संस्कार झस्काउँछ पलपल
न सक्छ तोड्न, न झुक्छ जवानी
दिल गर्छ कोही आफ्नो बनाउँ
सम्झेर तिमीलाई चुक्छ जवानी
यौवन यो तनमा बग्दछ रातभर
न पिउँछ कोही न सुक्छ जवानी
धड्किन्छ मुटु बल्झिदा रति
सम्हाल्दा आँफै दुख्छ जवानी
बुटवल –१३
योगीकुटी
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sachhi asu au6 bhidhawa ko
अतिथि — Wed, 10/14/2009 - 17:10sachhi asu au6 bhidhawa ko youn ichha lukaunu parda
Bhasha
अतिथि (not verified) — Sun, 04/24/2011 - 14:45Kya jhur sabda chayan gareko? Dhoti ho ki Nepali ho? Sabda herda kheri ta Jharkhadako Dhoti jasto chha ni?
Thumbs up!
bjbidrohee — Sun, 05/05/2013 - 19:00EuTa Amurta rup "bidhuwaa" ko yaslaai sakaraatmaka sochko rangamancha ma utaarnu parchha ki bidhuwaa euTa jiban ra laakhau rahar sanga jiuchhin.mitho srijana mitra.
BJ "Bidrohee"
लेखन साह्रै शसक्त तथा शब्दहरू
kbs — Wed, 10/14/2009 - 20:45लेखन साह्रै शसक्त तथा शब्दहरू शक्तिशाली (powerful) लाग्यो!
गजल बिषयमा बाधिएको एवम शसक्त
Anubhav — Thu, 10/15/2009 - 14:37गजल बिषयमा बाधिएको एवम शसक्त लाग्यो
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nice poem
mukta — Sat, 04/16/2011 - 10:15nice poem
hai
shyam adhikari (not verified) — Fri, 04/22/2011 - 07:28actually to say it is natural thing in young age both women and man are very hanker for sex so it is said that umer ma kohipani bidhwa na hos ke men or women her gajall is very nice it expressed the real think and true i thank for her expressing real and actul fact i think in old culture this is bar for not doing remarriage i think culture shoul be chenged after her husband death if she likes to marriage again it is upto her low shold be changed in my vew thank you
dami reai cha. poem
अतिथि (not verified) — Sat, 04/23/2011 - 21:39dami reai cha. poem
versitile
anups — Sat, 06/04/2011 - 23:48versitile
अनुप कपाली
"यौवन यो तनमा बग्दछ रातभर न
ऋषि राम खवास (not verified) — Sat, 09/01/2012 - 23:33"यौवन यो तनमा बग्दछ रातभर
न पिउँछ कोही न सुक्छ जवानी"
गजलका हरफहरु संग पोखिएको यो तीतो सत्य एकदमै मन छुने खालको छ, यथार्थबादी यो गजलको लागि लेखक लाइ साधुबाद
Good.
अतिथि [email protected] (not verified) — Thu, 09/13/2012 - 13:55Good poem suppose it is written for middle age. Old age ma ta yasto hundaina hola!
nice one. No one can deny
Deep Raj Sharma — Fri, 10/19/2012 - 18:45nice one. No one can deny this
to read others feeling its
prasub.subedi — Sat, 06/15/2013 - 17:49to read others feeling its artistic
very nice like like like
neezam aanah — Wed, 06/19/2013 - 00:03very nice like like like
samro 6a
दिपक पान्डे (not verified) — Thu, 07/25/2013 - 21:27man dukheo mero ni
samaj vitra ko marmik pak6 ko
bharat.devkota.33 — Tue, 07/30/2013 - 12:34samaj vitra ko marmik pak6 ko udhan vayako 6.
Bharat Devkota
Chhoprak 7 Gorkha
उत्तम मनपर्यो
अतिथि (not verified) — Thu, 08/22/2013 - 13:14उत्तम मनपर्यो
Nice
अतिथिBadri (not verified) — Thu, 09/12/2013 - 00:54Nice
ma runa matra sakina
Bijay Paudel (not verified) — Fri, 10/18/2013 - 00:17ma runa matra sakina
MA RUNA MATRA SAKINA.
Bijay Paudel (not verified) — Fri, 10/18/2013 - 00:19MA RUNA MATRA SAKINA.
गजलको बारेमा
अतिथि (not verified) — Sat, 12/28/2013 - 11:03भित्रिकुण्ठाहरूको सहि उजागर।
yanything
लोकेन्द्र खड्का (not verified) — Thu, 01/02/2014 - 16:03सार्है मन पर्यो ।
यौवन यो तनमा बग्दछ रातभर न
अतिथि (not verified) — Sat, 03/22/2014 - 21:10यौवन यो तनमा बग्दछ रातभर
न पिउँछ कोही न सुक्छ जवानी
wa wa wa
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