its nice piece but it would its nice piece but it would be more interesting if it was expressed in otherway(s) to give same feeling. I found it good but not quite right. Poems should give direct meaning in indirect way(s). If I am wrong, sorry……Man ma lageko kura pokheko matra. huna Lekhak ko afnai dristikon huna sakchha. – akshaya
wow! hiude jhari….ani
wow! hiude jhari….ani luteu…!
its nice piece but it would
its nice piece but it would be more interesting if it was expressed in otherway(s) to give same feeling. I found it good but not quite right. Poems should give direct meaning in indirect way(s). If I am wrong, sorry……Man ma lageko kura pokheko matra. huna Lekhak ko afnai dristikon huna sakchha. – akshaya