हिँड अब सँगै जाउँ कुरा गर्दै सुस्त सुस्त
मनभित्र मीठो मीठो मायाभर्दै सुस्त सुस्त
भीड होला बाटाभरि अल्मलिन सक्छु
म चैं हिँडे तिमीलाई कुर्दै सुस्त सुस्त ।
फुल्न थाल्यो प्रेमको फूल मुटुभित्र
मीठो मन्द बास्ना छर्दै सुस्त सुस्त
सहज हुँदैन यात्रा मन मिल्ने नभए
थालौं बाटो खाल्डाहरु पुर्दै सुस्त सुस्त

susma you r one of the nice
susma you r one of the nice gazal kar who thouch my heart.really your all gazals are very very nice.i am also ane of the gazal writter so i want to contact you.if you want plz contact me my mail id nabin_yatri@yahoo.com
susma ji best of luck try to do best one day you will be the star of the nepal.
thank u nabinji for reading
thank u nabinji for reading and responding on my gazals.it is my pleasure to share writings.i got ur email id.u can mail me in my personal id too.
mdhsusma@yahoo.com
susma jii hajurko yo id add
susma jii hajurko yo id add nai hudaina error matra hun6 can you try to my add in your yahoo massenger please.
ok,i will mail u in ur Id
ok,i will mail u in ur Id nabinji.
thank u.
susma