Hi Friend,
I read your Hi Friend,
I read your Haiku.I found It more complecated and different from other types of poem. You are attempting writing new types of writing. Thank you for your attempt.keep it on.
hi susma hi susma jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii dherai ramra haiku lekhnu bhaye6
mitho lagyo tesaile hajurlai pani k hi pathaudai 6u
भन्थेउ तिमी
केटा मान्छे भएर
कति कोमल
Hi Friend,
I read your
Hi Friend,
I read your Haiku.I found It more complecated and different from other types of poem. You are attempting writing new types of writing. Thank you for your attempt.keep it on.
hi susma
hi susma jiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii dherai ramra haiku lekhnu bhaye6
mitho lagyo tesaile hajurlai pani k hi pathaudai 6u
भन्थेउ तिमी
केटा मान्छे भएर
कति कोमल
तिम्रो यादमा
अनिदा रात हरु
सौगात मेरो