टाढा हुँदैमा दुइचार दिन, कति सजिलै बिर्सिएछौ
कारण सोध्नु कता हो कता, अनायसै रिसिएछौ
तिमीलाइ ठान्थें म आफ्नो मनको अन्तरंग
अपशोच ∕ तिमी पनि अरुको लहलहैमा मिसिएछौ ।
सोच्थें तिमीलाई पनि न्यास्रो लाग्दो हो मेरो
होइन रहेछ, भुलायौ तिमीले, ढुक्कै चिसिएछौ ।
अल्मलिएर बाटो बिराएँ, कोही साथ भएनन्
मेरो दुर्दशामा रोएनौ, ताली पिट्दै हर्षिएछौ ।
“जहाँ मन छ,त्यही घर हो” भन्थे मान्छेहरु
तिमी भने घर छाडी सम्साँझै निस्किएछौ ।
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yeto lageko thiyo hajur pani samshjai katai niskanu bhayo
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Ramrai lagyo
manoj
Ramrai lagyo
manoj
Nabin ji ra Manoj ji,sujhab
Nabin ji ra Manoj ji,sujhab ra tippaniko lagi hardik dhanyabad dindai tapaiharubata pachhi pani healthy commentko apeksya garchhu.
sushma
Hi Dear Susmaji,
I read your
Hi Dear Susmaji,
I read your GAJAL. I thought that it was written ispecially ndicating me. It touch my heart and mind. I am so much upset to read. I will not be far any more from you. Now are you ok?
Some times it happends to get more MAYA from his/her MAYALU.AM I right?
your
krishna Rajbhnadari
Hi Dear susmaji,
I read your
Hi Dear susmaji,
I read your GAJAL.It seems very nice but it hurt my heart. I thiought it was written specially indicating me.Ok, i will not try to be far any more from you. Some times it happens to get more MAYA and BISWAS.
thank you for your GAJAL
yr
krishna Rajbhandari.